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[Ronny_test]

Nice

Even as a test this was good. But the dad's head was flashing while talking to the mom.

megaener responds:

yes I noticed when I submitted it... something wrong with the symbols... I'll try to fix it in the real one

[The boy & the bird]

Ah yes

Very nice animation, and storyline, quick and gave me a nice laugh.

SkyKitsune responds:

Im glad it did. Thanks alot. :]

[A Coconut's World]

zOK

Without faulting your drawing, I felt the day in the life of a coconut was not very exciting.

The part where the sound "I have you now" was pointless, but amusing, got a small smile till the "team rocket" thing happened. Very disappointed thats how you did it. Mostly that area of the flash could have been expanded to be more funny at the least. My vote is based off that.

As far as the artwork, It could use some touch ups. Being it's your first flash, don't be daunted by bad reviews. Learn from them. Your art stile is not bad, but a better story would go miles towards an epic flash.

zockman responds:

Well thank you that helps alot.

[Revenge of the Turkeys]

Intresting

It was amusing - but that was about it.

muffinman9 responds:

er...Merry Christmas?

Would help if you actually gave some critism...