razo-dedezmond's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Coconut's World]

zOK

Without faulting your drawing, I felt the day in the life of a coconut was not very exciting.

The part where the sound "I have you now" was pointless, but amusing, got a small smile till the "team rocket" thing happened. Very disappointed thats how you did it. Mostly that area of the flash could have been expanded to be more funny at the least. My vote is based off that.

As far as the artwork, It could use some touch ups. Being it's your first flash, don't be daunted by bad reviews. Learn from them. Your art stile is not bad, but a better story would go miles towards an epic flash.

zockman responds:

Well thank you that helps alot.

[Three Wishes]

Hmmmm

The only thing that could have made this better is if the person granting the wishes was a hot chick. ohhhhhhhh the irony.

[Rock Lee vs Rock Lee]

Not bad but....

Ok, over all concept of the fight was not to bad. But following the clone through the fight was nearly impossible for me. Making them distinguished with different colors would help a lot.

The main annoyance is that the buttons to click to continue the sequence are in different places its best to try to have them in the same spot through out the movie.

Commentary was basic, and dry IMO. But execution of the over all combat was not to shabby.

[Here in my Head]

Random

And thats what makes it good, I got a good laugh.

[Drunken Stick]

Ahhhhhhhhh

I could feel his pain..... Damn nice work

[Future]

Int

Song got me to tap my feet.
Animation was wonderful I enjoyed it, very well done.

Very well done.

[Revenge of the Turkeys]

Intresting

It was amusing - but that was about it.

muffinman9 responds:

er...Merry Christmas?

Would help if you actually gave some critism...

[With My Mind's Madness]

Wow... Just wow....

Am I going to hell becuase I loved this?

["A Slice of the Action"]

Random!

At most I was expecting Pizza... Not that... LMAO

[Egg]

Very Nice

KFC anybody?